How's It Gonna Be

How's It Gonna Be

A Poem by shinybluestars03

How's it gonna be...
when you decide it's time
to leave it all and not look behind.
How's it gonna feel...
when all your happiness
has been thrown away,
and your smile has been
slapped, right out of your face.
How's it gonna feel...
when all the memories have erased,
and you somehow now feel replaced.
And what are you gonna say,
when you know it's much too late
for those longing goodbyes,
you've been waiting to repeat.
Damn, what's it gonna take,
for you to see
that our love is at stake,
and what you decide might just be,

a big mistake.


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bluestars .... [ 2006-07-11 01:04:53 ]
 

© 2008 shinybluestars03


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so emotional so many people get in this situation

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. Amazing. I know exactly how this feels. You put such emotion into your poem. I really hope it all works out for you. Great work.

Sincerely,
Miss Carmine

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is absolutely fantastic. I can feel the force the grief the anger and the love behind this poem.
This is a powerful, very powerful write.
I hope things turn out the way you want.
Great work. This one goes to my fav's,

Posted 16 Years Ago


OMG, I am in this situation and had almost those exact words spoken to me today. So well written. Sometimes we need to shove the one we love in the right direction. Sometimes their right direction is not yours. I wish you well and hope you find what it takes!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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