Underneath Her SKin

She sits outside
and starts to write,
to a love that she tries to erase
but can't escape.
To learn that he has found
someone new
hurts her bleeding heart,
for he has made
a profound mark,
underneath her skin.
And even though
time has moved along,
she still sits and awaits
his return,
for his warm embrace
still lingers...
underneath her skin.


Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2007-01-30 17:34:18 ]
 

Reviews

[Janice Ann]

A lost love is like being a recovering addict! It truly is..but time will show that girl that sits and awaits this mans return that her heart will heal and those lost feelings will become found! I enjoyed reading this.
Janice Ann

[Legion]

For some reason this feels like the antithesis of a piece I wrote called "Like No Hand Before". Not just the subject matter, but the flow as well. I like this. Especially the repetition of that one line. So sad for her though. Good write.