Numb

Numb

A Poem by shinybluestars03

I took a picture in my mind
of your beautiful wondering eyes,
how i can feel them
hypnotizing me, and warming me
up with delite.
With my eyes shut tight
I remember how you would
take my hand,
showing them the way
to a wonderful peaceful state in time.
How your smile would numb my body
like a deer looking at a bright light,
how I would just melt with your soft
passionate kisses
oh, how I miss this...
I don't know how you would take me to
such wonderful bliss.
So many sweet dreams
I have of it all.
How your passion drove me insane,
because being with you toke away my pain.
All I can do now is,
close my eyes and wait
for the numbness to crawl upon my skin...





Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2007-12-14 18:36:08 ]
 

© 2008 shinybluestars03


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really sad, but well expressed, like this write i can feel the emotion......Kim

Posted 16 Years Ago


How sad.
How very sad when all we have is to close our eyes and wait- to close our eyes and hope.
There is beauty in life's little tragedies, to be seen only by the perceptive few.
Nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome... just awesome.. good job
Magic

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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