Last Dance

Today I've decided
to go down to the graveyard
and stand by your grave.
I've brought you some flowers
the same ones you always bought me.
I'm wearing your favorite black dress,
and my hair looks like a mess
but I know you won't mind
cause all i wanted to do
is sit by your side.
I close my eyes,
and dance around your grave
I feel you holding on to me
like if it was yesterday.
You swing me from side to side
and whisper in my ear...
"Yes darling, here I am next to you
once again, dancing our last dance".
I try not to cry,
as your whispers bring me chills.
I know you must go back
and I must let you go,
but at least we both know
that one day we will continue
to swing from side to side,
and enjoy our last dance.







Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2008-06-07 10:50:14 ]
 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Yes I see the similarity of my poem..When someone has a long... over the years love that has lasted and weathered each storm I can see how much giving back the flowers and having that last dance can mean to the one alone's heart.. Lasting love comes so rarely these days..Nice write,,I enjoyed it very much..God bless..Valentine

[darkgurl]

Like the emotion in this write, very well expressed and beautiful written......Kim

[unspokenguilt]

sweet and sad i loved it!

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This is by far my favorite poem of yours. Very simple, yet extremely deep and emotional. I can tell it means a lot to you. Beautiful!

-Jade

[chloe cruz]

Really beautiful, and precise, one of the most well done poems I've reviewed tonight. I love how you express it all, the dance... I can imagine it... True love, is so sweet, so beautiful. Thanks for this, I loved it...

[Sapphire Balasquez]

it's a beautiful moment, but tragic at the same time. i really like this poem, and the feeling it lets out and the style that it's written in, it's very personal. so dark and yet such a clear picture. well done.

[Blackheart]

Very beautiful and poignant, this piece stirred my emotions. Thank you for sharing a very intimate moment.