Lost

I feel lost,
I've lost my way.
I don't know which way to cross or if to stay,
I've just kept running, running away.
I feel lost,
I've lost my way.
Lost in a dream of mystery,
in a dream of fantasy.
Lost in your eyes of wonder
looking for hope and despair
looking for a way out,
for a way in.
Lost in the dark,
lost in the night of star bright.
Lost in time,
have I lost my mind?
I see the light,
I see the day
I see you coming closer my way
You pull me away
hold me near
whispear sweet nothings in my ear.
And if I get lost again...
I know I have you to save me in the end.

 

Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2006-06-29 01:39:01 ]

 

Reviews

[Darlin]

I like the ending of this poem it was unexpected. I also like the line "Lost in time, Have I lost my mind?"

You are a good writer!!!

[RAZZLE DAZZLE]

I love this poem! It really does come together nicley!
Thanks for reviewing mine, and I wasn't the one with missed opportunities haha...

[Dani California]

I like this! It flows and rhymes with ease.... just gently gliding.
A very emotional piece...

"Lost in your eyes of wonder
looking for hope and despair
looking for a way out,
for a way in"

These are my favorite lines. I think the confusion displayed here is something most of us can relate to.

Very nicely done!