That Song

That Song

A Poem by shinybluestars03

 

When night falls I lay quiet to try and
remember the words to that song...
That song that you dedicated
That song that you sang,
the words so soothing
it made me dream of yesterday.
That song I hear on the radio and
it makes me believe your here.
That song we sang together
it blew away my fears,
as you brushed away my tears.
That song we danced
all through the star bright night.
With that song we made love endlessly
as we flew away and talked to the moon.
That song is my lullaby,
my comfort, my way of remembering you.
That song brings a smile to my face.
Even though you are now gone...
that song will always be... our song.

 


Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2006-06-10 01:40:30 ]


© 2008 shinybluestars03


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that is so beautiful i can really feel the love that this poem brings back inside my heart for i too have a song of love that will for ever live on inside my heart of a love that is forever gone we never realise just how much something like this means to use until there gone but the song of love will for ever live on great work and so beautifully written than you for sharing this i will keep it in my favorites for ever

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I like the flow of your poem. Very sweet and sentimental. I think you need to change quite to quiet and your to you're. Hope you don't mind me saying so. Sincerely

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful poem, it seems we all have those favorite songs that remind us of the times we have spent with those we loved. This was a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's sweet! I know how awesome it is to have a song with someone.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is so beautiful i can really feel the love that this poem brings back inside my heart for i too have a song of love that will for ever live on inside my heart of a love that is forever gone we never realise just how much something like this means to use until there gone but the song of love will for ever live on great work and so beautifully written than you for sharing this i will keep it in my favorites for ever

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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