If The Sun Didn't Shine

It slightly dark...

Night, it sucks you in

Never to let go

Until the sun decides to show

But what if the sun doesn't shine

What could contain the darkness

That is pleading to grow

What immortal barrier

Could save our darkened fate?

If the sun refused to show.

Would darkness rear 

Upon all with fright

Would we succumb too our fate

Or would we drown in

A dark invading sea

To scream pleas on deaf ears

In the darkness of the night

What will happen 

without a hint of light.

Author's Note

Please review. Just another poem.

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

Very thought provoking. Although this is not something I ponder, I think you have done a terrific job portraying thoughts without the possibility of light. Superb!

[ShaneBerry]

very dark, in a good way, i liked this poem alot! ;)