If The Sun Didn't Shine

It slightly dark...

Night, it sucks you in

Never to let go

Until the sun decides to show

But what if the sun doesn't shine

What could contain the darkness

That is pleading to grow

What immortal barrier

Could save our darkened fate?

If the sun refused to show.

Would darkness rear 

Upon all with fright

Would we succumb too our fate

Or would we drown in

A dark invading sea

To scream pleas on deaf ears

In the darkness of the night

What will happen 

without a hint of light.

Author's Note

Please review. Just another poem.

Reviews

[Art Sun]

A well written poem...visually expressive...

[TeenRomance2]

Awesome poem. You're way talented :-)

[Marie Harrison]

It's beautiful. I love the tone, the mood, the style and the imagery.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

Where it says "are" did you mean "our"?
Nice poem, nonetheless. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

The night does seem to suck you in. I love the night time and the shining moon and the bright twinkling stars.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good.

[KaySea]

very nice

[J. R.]

Excellent use of light and dark imagery.
It really sets the tone of the entire piece so well.

[Cheryl J. Turner]

You are a very talented writer, this was well written and mellow in a very dark way. A wonderful piece of writing.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

very nice, cool poem, lol, idk, if this means anything but no matter how dark it gets, it wont put out the Light, only make It shine brighter, but awesome