Never Coming Home

Never Coming Home

A Poem by Muffin<3
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It's slightly dark.

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In a crevice imbedded in to the Earth
The place I used to know
Where the darkness stole my soul
To be forcefully deleted from my mind
Hoping that one would come
I stood looking and searching
But to my plea, no one is here to save me
Burnt edges of my mind
From lost hope and denial
It struck me harder then any blow
To know that I'll never come home.

© 2010 Muffin<3


Author's Note

Muffin<3
This is a poem I had written awhile ago. Please review. I can handle criticism. I love to hear what people think.

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This is sad, murder is the worst a person could do. The grave is waiting for us all, it's just a matter of time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The grave (literally or figuratively) stirs depression, loneliness, and sadness in us all. A brilliant write. Short and bittersweet. For some reason this reminds me of something Tool might do. Kudos.

Posted 14 Years Ago


such a sad and lost soul. very sad but life looks up, we die right? then everythings good. this was a very good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very touching... dark poem well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very dark and melancholy. I went through a small and I do mean small gothic phase where I wondered what other things out there existed but I never really waivered. I'm just glad as Little Lily said that I found my way back to the Lord. It really does help.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sad and creepy Sounded like what i went through when i didn't know who i was and lost my way to Jesus and life and many of my family members didn't know who i was But I didn't Give up or Give into the Darkness or Evil Nice Imagination here. God Bless my Friend take care

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good write. I didn't think it was dark, a little depressed but not much. More of a wandering soldier feel from me. If that makes any sense.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is concise and beautifully written!
Pain and the lessons of life fused with a longing almost!
A place that can never be returned to must be exorcised lol
Awesome
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is actually alright. It flows well and has a deep meaning behind the words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like it ... its twisted

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hi Im Sarah, aka Muffin. A lil abot me: I'M VERY RANDOM!!! AND A HUGGER! I have a weird, yet lovable personality. I rather not conform and be molded into something I'm not. I have extreme PIE A.. more..

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