Goddess Not I am

Its about me.......

 

 

I am what I would have wanted to be,

I am the aspiration of myself.

 

I am a butterfly when I want to tickle the flowers,

I am a bird when I want to compete with the flecks of cotton overlapping the sky,

I am the river when I want to mock the stand-still mountains,

I am the sand when I want the turbulent sea to rest on my shoulders,

I am the rain when I want to splash in the puddles,

I am the rainbow when I want to paint the bland sky,

I am a mother when I want to love selflessly,

And I am me when I want to be free.

That’s what I am,

Everything.

Because I am blessed to be,

To be a poet.

And imagine the world of me.

I AM FREE & UNBOUND.

 

 

Reviews

[A.J. Smith]

This is absolutely wonderful...what an amazing piece of writing! First of all, your keen intellect and creative mind (both qualities I am drawn to in a writer) are clearly demonstrated. Secondly, I love your structure and flow. Thirdly, you paint such fantastic images with your precise use of language and words.
Perhaps the only change I would suggest would be to consider dropping the word "at" from this wonderful line: "I am the river when I want to mock at the stand-still mountains." I look forward to reading all of your future work. Thank you for asking me to read and comment on your work. Please send more!

[George Love]

That is why I thought I read this before. Whew! Deja VU! Well done work, great flow and character!

[Joy C]

I love it, this is what I feel when writing poetry. You have a great imagination=). Yay~ just be yourself.

[An Ordinary Woman]

I agree, it's amazing! I'm glad your friend asked you to post it, it's delightful!!

I AM FREE & UNBOUND... a perfect note to end on! Well done!!

[Kaylan Katz [is writing..]

That is amazing! My favorite part is about the rainbow- painting the sky when it is bland; isn't that what the world needs nowadays? Love it, what a great write. :)

[Just Manoosh]

I am free and unbound. I adored this piece ...... So beautiful and so very inspiring. Mx

[Phil Sanders]

Absolutely delightful .. it floats across my mind ....

[Beth]

It's great to be able to be whatever you want - absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You sound like a wonderful free spirit that enjoys life and remains a child at heart... Thats the best way to be.

[Fran Marie]

Very nice indeed and Beautifully written~ Thanks for sharing this~Fran Marie

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Aww, man, this was absolutely beautiful!! Very gorgeously written, and very filled with deep emotions, as well as a very colorful picture you paint. A very brilliant write that describes your soul :) Very Well Done!!

Mikey