Sheol

Fight your Inner Demons!

SHEOL By Solaris LeRouche

 

This darkness is infinite...

The sun never shines here...

What is this pain inside me?

What is this pounding in my head?

HELP! SAVE ME!
RESCUE ME FROM SHEOL!!

This darkness inside of me, wraps its black arms around me.

Please! Someone come to me save me from AGONY!!

This darkness inside...
It's trying to escape!

It cries out wickedly:
"Open the Sheol gate!"

"Get away from me, locked away where you’re supposed to be!!"

As much as I fight... you're much stronger... then I imagined...

Now I'm even deeper in this darkness...

With a rumbling sound you show you're true face to me!..

...Exactly what I wanted you to do!!

With a sound like a symphony, Light erupts from me!
Burning away all the fear and pain.

It throws you away, slings you against the Gate!

No matter how much you plead, you're not going to stop me.

"Open The Sheol Gate!!!"

 

Reviews

[Evil Albino Fish Monkey]

Hmm, not sure what's going on in it, but you used imagery very well. Then again, things that are vague - especially poems - are usually the best! Good job ^_^

[Aly Jones]

Is this a story or a poem? There's just so much detail that I've sadly become confused.

[Solaris LeRouche]

Its funny to watch a Demon get pawnd Isn't it?

[_]

fight!fight!fight! and the winner is solaris! ding ding ding! :)