Mr Mr Dark Chocolate

Is it you that I see?

Something about the

 way you make me feel

ooow.. Mr Mr Dark Chocolate

Milky like a Milky way

can't resist walking past your way

Wondering how you can make me feel 

Wondering where my heart lies

If you stole my heart today 

I promise that I'll never give it away

Walking home looking at the stars

Thinking about how yummy you are

Not just one not just two 

but its you that brings me to my knees

I have to calm down 

shaking hands

shaking knees

Just like sugar high but through my

knees

Racing fast like a flash 

of you in front of me

Are you waiting for me?

oooow Mr Mr Chocolate

Tall enough 

Hug me close

Fill me up

But don't bring me down

Make me feel like 

there is no one else in town

Walking close 

Getting nearer

Yearning for you 

Night and day

Know I don't need you today

Pressing my hands against the wall 

Thoughts are racing 

Why am I pacing? 

Wish this feeling would go away

But your name just keeps me insane

Why must I do this to myself

Knowing that your no good for me

Just knowing that you could hurt me

But still wanting you to comfort me

I can't !

I won't!

ooow MR MR CHOCOLATE

You are what I want

You are what I need

Its ok, its just you and me

No one else will interrupt 

you and me

I'll just sneak you in my house

No need for waking up the whole house

You will be my Chocolate

I'm not sharing you with no one else

Thinking about you all night long

Had to run out 

and write this poem

I am addicted to you

ooowww Chocolate 

oooowww Mr Mr Chocolate

Here I am 

Here I stand

Glazing at the glass window where you stand

Looking at the price knowing 

how much you cost 

So much money 

But so good it's no ones fault

ooowww Mr Mr Chocolate

I can't resist

Heres my money

Heres my card

Keep my secret

I'll start tomorrow 

I promise to start

I'll loose thirty

or maybe forty 

But for now 

Oh just for right now 

Let me have you 

Oh 

Oh

MR MR CHOCOLATE

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Yummy read, addictive really!

[Shimae Parks]

Thank you so much

[Moonie]

Hahaha. Nice one. I loved how your words make me feel high(the high we feel afyer eating a lot of dark chocolate). Very, very original. I like the adrenalin rush it gives. My only suggestion would be, change ,"Wondering where my heart lays" to "wondering where my heart lies" . Other than that I love the flow, the little rhymes that you have scattered here and there, and the word choice is brilliant. Thanks for such a beautiful poem.:))
and also, I love the double "mr.":))

[Shimae Parks]

Thanks for the review means a lot