Bonsoir Amour De Ma Vie( "Goodnight love of my life")

Unite thine heart

for thy love is torn apart

Goodnight my love 

for I shall miss thy kiss against

thine lips

Goodnight my love 

For I pray thy keep you safe

For thine heart would surely break 

If you were lost out at sea

Goodnight my love

and fair well 

for I shall die a lonely man

whom shall no one love once again

for thine heart has broken me

and I shall see thy heart drifting 

for you thine heart 

shall always be

for I shall never be free

only for you my love can set me free

for which I see my destiny 

so goodnight my love 

I pray to thee you would hear me

and come back to me 

for I my love cannot breathe

for you are all I need

to break the spell which is binding me

I shall request for you immediately

for this I take my life 

for thine own life 

for this world has despaired me 

and I my love have ended thee

for you shall find me 

in peaceful sleep 

were my eyes have closed 

and tears have fallen

but for I have left 

this horrid place

to stay forever in your grace

which love can never be replace

in loving arms where I shall stay

for goodnight has no night

and no day has no light just forever 

thine shall stay 

for you will see thine face

which will smile with grace

to hold a tear to my face

which you see thine heart 

has now come back to me.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Really romantic and I felt the longing in your poem with a classic touch. Nicely done.

[Shimae Parks]

Thank you for the review :)

[Everett DeValle]

You're very welcome, Ma'am. My pleasure.

[Goat]

This is a really stunning romantic poem. I love the way it is written in Elizabethan, it makes it sound cooler and more powerful. Though it seems you didn't write it in complete Elizabethan but I guess that's because complete Elizabethan is really confusing. Nice write, loved it!

[Shimae Parks]

thank you and you are correct I couldn't figure out the rest haha but It took me a long time to write it

[Moonie]

Absolutely beautiful, ma'am. Though, I couldn't understand why younchose to write "you" instead of thou or thee.:) I love the lines- "for I my love cannot breathe
for you are all I need
to break the spell which is binding me"

[Shimae Parks]

I was trying to remember which one was which hahaha thanks for the review!