Hey Thats My Poem!

It's about some one who knows a good writer when they see it and decides to take their poem and claim it for themselves. What would you do in this situation, finish the poem?

Have you ever felt like you were being watched

have you ever had the feeling you weren't alone

last night I walked home from work and seen a shadow that wasn't mine

It was larger and wider and had wavy through the night

I hurried home so fast that I forgot about the time 

This person who is following me doesn't know, I know karate 

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thanks for sharing your poem

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wait that was my poem!

Reviews

[Marshall]

The key element in this writing is the shadow. That should be fused into a metaphor and built into a structural tight pattern. The very idea that you saw a shadow should create a suspenseful, emotional response, which in a poetic sense, should 'show' not 'tell' the idea. Keep working on it.
Please take all my comments as constructive criticism and if not suited to your taste, just ignore them. Cheers

[Shimae Parks]

Its ok thank you for your input, it just open doors for new ideas I didn't know about :)