In Love

When we are in love, the only thing we can do is constantly think about the lover. This is dedicated to my love, for make me feel this.

as i sink in to the sleep,

from the deep, love rise above.

as i rise back from the sleep, 

from the dream, you still glow.

every time my mind try,

fill you in every thought.

every time when i think,

in a feeling i am caught.

i want to get next to you,

it is all i want to do.

every time i see you,

time flies, oh! what to do.

from past, my heart was numb,

and then, you melted it slow,

and filled with tender love,

made it fly like a dove.

i shine in your afterglow......

Author's Note

any kind of review is accepted. tips to improve are also welcomed.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love the rhyming scheme and the way it flows :)
So cute how it was about your wife.
Have you showed her this?
I beat she would love it.
Very romantic and sweet write straight from your heart.
Great job i enjoyed :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Ah love, the intimacy of it is one awkwardly shared with such a smile in between two people who love each other. It's the reminder that no matter how calm the night gets therein more will lie a deeper peace between the two swimmers of the star ocean. For they swim in the places where the stars don't even swim. They swim and breathe the dreams of what true love is, what may ever it is because what is shared between the two's love is one never swam on the same stream ever.

Thank you very much for the sharing of your poetry and have a great weekend Sir :)