Mr.Psycho

A poem written to vent the anger, as its not possible to do so in the real world. its with a comical sense, Hope it will bring a smile on the reader's face.

Mr. Psycho

dragon, it's your tail that's on fire

we wait for the day you retire

bygone, they don't care for your dire

so see its your post they desire

you're the monkey on my back

and you think i am just a slack

you are the biggest techno-crack

i want to kick you on your back

You're the menacing mean Psycho

And you did not want to let me go

Are you the  freaking fan of Nero? 

Breathes in fire, as you hear 'hello'.

frown up your brows to the most

crown down your mind for the toast

are you defected by some ghost

Moron, why don't just get lost

Author's Note

any kind of review is accepted. tips to improve are also welcomed.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well structured.
The repeated rhymes are like punches! Good job it is poetry!

[Cupofwords]

This is great, it reads like an angry pop-song. "Techno-crack," good word.

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha ha
fun to read
written in anger right?

[Joyrider]

Yes, it is written in anger. To be honest, the dragon in the poem is not me, its a guy who is very short tempered. This poem is written to vent my anger towards this guy, because in real life it is not possible to do so. :p

[Laminators Dubai]

oooh
got it well that not new, so many people out there, wasting their anergy just like that...

[Robert Lindsay]

The most important part is that its very good fun to read

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Interesting write, the rhyming was good :) i didnt mind it its different well done.

[Lydia Shutter]

Great rhyming in this one! I liked the metaphor of the dragon and the fire being anger. Good venting. Lydi**

[zaneybear]

very good piece, truly enjoyed I like the entire idea of the dragon to get your anger out. good job. keep writing

[ayosonolowo]

Nice one, i really like it.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I like how you use some humor to get the message across of describe a state you are going through by using great imagery...Bravo

[NA]

great vent, enjoyed...very much :) x