Bee

Spont-prose fun with B words

Born bleeding

and begging

at the bosom of beauty

only to be broken

and braced against the brim

to watch beguiled

by the b******s that breathe

every last breath of bloom

until black is best

as a backdrop to project

barren blisters of blight onto

and burn reckless

in the blindness

never to behold the truth of the bold.

Reviews

[DavidRyanM]

Honestly, I didn't know what to expect when I opened this one. But I'm glad I didn't. Having any kind of preconceived idea wouldn't have done it justice at all. I hate rhyming poetry -- almost more than anything else -- and I've never really read too many people (at least on this site) that went for a more "letter associated piece" but you pulled it off brilliantly, my friend. Not only that but finding a way to make the whole thing extremely strong while being under the rules of using mostly "b" words.

[Kimberly Smith]

really good...i love it