Why

Why

A Poem by Danielle
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Don't know if I really like this, will try to improve...

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Angels gather at the cafe above

Sending out unrequited love


The spirit of the deep blue sky

Asks why do you not try


You solemnly reply

Breathe a deep sigh


Why must I cry?

Perhaps it is all a lie


Dear friend, 

You ask too much why

© 2012 Danielle


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sometimes we do quesiton too much instead of just accepting the beauty of how things are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Danielle

11 Years Ago

Thank you
it rhymes.. en i love it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the first two lines. Beautiful. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short, simple yet very lovely. You have a gift

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 20, 2012
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Danielle
Danielle

Beckley, WV



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