Poison

Poison

A Poem by Danielle

Could you taste this dream
Have it all be as it does seem
Echoed fantasies whisper tales untold
A lovers passion takes a hold
One another's lips 
Beyond caressing fingertips
Poison 

© 2012 Danielle


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Very simple but good poem and the "Poison" at the end was like a punch to the face to make you understand the rest of the poem. Though that wasn't hard to do in the first place. This was a well written poem with a good rhyme. Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very deep.. short and simple but well expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple but I loved it. "Beyond caressing fingertips" is probably my favorite line. The word beyond can take you a very long way. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 17, 2012
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Danielle
Danielle

Beckley, WV



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