Thy pen is mightier than the sword, but get what you're saying. If I had the power, I'd do just the same and more. The ideas are flowing and credible. Excellent read and write.
I like how deffinitive you are in this. This is how it's going to be, no ifs ands or buts about it. It's a strong piece, almost shouting at a reader. That's a good thing considering it is full of strong ideas and principles.
Small suggestion leave out the words classes of. You cover them with lowerclass, middleclass, and upperclass. Leaving in the classes of makes the next three redundant and takes away from the piece.
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