Come put out my Fire

We both know I've made it known

that I am attracted

 

but what I don't know

cuz you won't tell me so

 

is if you are....

 

Could you be

with a girl like me

 

You know I think your gorgeous

and I long for just one kiss

 

Not ashamed to say I want a taste

This passion I will not waste

 

Want to know if you go fast or slow

If I could match your flow

 

Could I call you baby

Have you rescue and save me

 

Feel your lips with mine

How can you be this fine

 

Boy you've got me an aching

Oh how I'd love to be making

 

Want your smooth within

How can this lust be sin

 

When it feels so good

And with you I know it would

 

I want you to fulfill this desire

Come put out my fire

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[DarkRainbowPie]

Very song-like. It would be a great song :)

[Moon]

A very sweet poem. Feelings can sometimes be so over whelming, but yet so wonderful at the same time. The desire in this poem is like a burning flame, hot and hungry.

[Sami Khalil]

I would if I could but with a muse then I have an excuse...lol
A wonderful poem for love and deaisre...:)...................