A PANG OF NOSTALGIA

Shoot! it came , i dreamt, far deep i went asleep

farthest, beyond the heights of mountains clouds, dry lands

Beyond sheep wrecks, still vineyards and all real lands

as arive i did, eyes closed in sleep.

sweet and sour tasted my mouth, so it tasted, oh!

hot and cold my body became, nothing felt sane.

My eyes are wet, or dry, asked as delved deep in sleep, oh!

Shoot!! as the sound came, had i felt it? or not.

as all was void, empty seemed filled, cold felt warm,

dry felt wet, alas! alas!!

though came sweetness, or bitter i felt?

Peace smelt unrest, how not understandable i had become.

it did happen, like ligthning striking twice,

it did move the quickest as i perished on this hard earth,

Pang of nostalgia? i couldn't tell.

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[Anahat]

Nicely written :)
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