my heart in a quandary

SHOULD I, OR SHOULD I NOT, I COULDNT TELL, I WAS IN, BUT WANTED OUT...

MY EGGS WERE FULL, BUT I DIDNT WANT IT SO, STAND BACK AND STARE, I DID...

UNSURE AND UNCONVINCED, I HEARD SHE PASSED AWAY, THE LORD GIVETH...

AND TAKETH, RIGHT OR WRONG??

 

MY CONFUSIONS ARE SYNICAL, I AM A COMPLETE RETARD, OR NOT?

I THINK I LOVE TIS GIRL, OH! I KNOW I DO....

SHE WORE HEELS, IT MADE HER SIX FEET TALL....

I LOVED HER, I LOVE HER,....

MY HEART IN A QUANDARY-SHOULD I GO OR SHOULD I STAY?

 

 

PEN-NAME........ SHERKUR!

Author's Note

short poem to review, i welcome your sincere reviews, leave nothing out. thanks.

Reviews

[michele vera]

HI Charles, I just read this Poem for the first time. to Me, it's Packed with Important Questions.Your Poetry Poses Questions where there doesn't seem to be an exact Perfected answer. Then again, I don't believe that one answer necessarily fits all. there always remains Points to be debated. However I will do my best to tell You how I interpretted this Poem. Well to me, Love is such a strong emotion. It can bring out a lot in Us. I Believe Once You Truly Love another, somehow it always remains with You. Whether You go or Stay if it is Truly Love-It will always remain with You.I love this Poem! It Poses good questions. You are a fabulous Writer,with very important questions. I look forward to reading more of your Work.Another Great Write!