What I Think Of Us

What I Think Of Us

A Poem by ѕнєявєят ℓємση
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What to think about you-about love,about our life,about you.

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What I Think Of Us

 

I think of us and where we are

I think of how we've come so far

That feeling when we shared a kiss

That,I know,was pure bliss

Now here I stand,all alone

In my house,in my home

Am I supposed to tell you what's in my heart?

Or are we supposed to just restart?

Will things ever be the same?

No,everything's going to change

I can't say what I think of you

But you can tell me,and you have too

Now I stand here,scared of us

There you go,on the bus

You left me to my pool of tears

Forever?

Or until things cool off?

Am I supposed to forget the truth?

Or go to a kissing booth?

I can't say now

I  can't say how

But I will remember our love

From the start

And darling you will always be in my heart

 

© 2012 ѕнєявєят ℓємση


Author's Note

ѕнєя�™єят ℓємση
Any grammer problems and stuff please ignore.
You hate my poem? Fine.
This is a story (to explain) of someone who loved a person,and they were in a relationship,but he never loved her back.
And now she is left to her "pool of tears"
This has never happened to me,I am single with no heartbreak,but I like writing about it.
Thanks for reading!

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Very sweet poem. I loved it. A couple grammar issues:
1. You don't put any spaces after your commas. Just an observation.
2. In the fourth last line there are two spaces between the I and the can't. You might want to change that.
Anyhow, great poem. I loved it!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very sweet poem. I loved it. A couple grammar issues:
1. You don't put any spaces after your commas. Just an observation.
2. In the fourth last line there are two spaces between the I and the can't. You might want to change that.
Anyhow, great poem. I loved it!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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