We

The streams that underline and lace

the crevices of this  mortal case,

Curve gently within its soft decay,

Illustrating the face we claim,

As fleshy caskets that dance with grace

are hindered by ghosts the past can never erase,

And while intelligence reigns supreme,

We wither to nothingness, such torrid beings,

The eyes bring forth the heathen glow,

Amidst sensual nervousness,

Wrapped in white sheets,

And metal screams,

That lunge forth from deep within,

To smite this wicked symphony,

We.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

this is beautifully written . Simply put it is sexy. love it.

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you. It's been a long time since I last wrote, really looking forward to opinions, good and bad. It's not easy getting back in the habit, especially after a couple years...

[Steven]

"Amidst sensual nervousness,
Wrapped in white sheets,
And metal screams,"

Yeah that got to me. 'Sensual nervousness, wrapped in white sheets and metal screams." Something entirely perfect about that. I'm sure there is a deeper allegory relative to the broader write but I could let the rest go and just read that. Everything is there: mystery, naivete, innocence, death, wild sex, and a new (for me) phrase that cements it all together: 'sensual nervousness.' Yes

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you Steven, it's a new one for me too. Suprisingly enough there isn't a deeper allergory, they were just a bunch of random thoughts arranged together like a pile of twigs tied together with string, each imperfect in every way.

Will try and spew more soon. Appreciate the positive support, it does so much for my writers -esteem or writesteem? Lol

[Steven]

They call those f*****s. No really, look it up ;)

Haha, sure. And good..

[Jamestown]

Awesome word play! Really enjoyed reading this and thanks for sharing!PTL!

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you, it's been a long while since I last put pen to paper. Appreciate the kind words.

[Jamestown]

You are welcome, keep writing and b-blessed!