Girl's Night Out.

A contemporary sonnet

The bowels of the club hum; bass makes piss vibrate
in loo-bowls; bog-roll jellyfish quiver
unflushed. Girls touch-up make-up in cheap glass.
Gloss-soaked f*g-ends waved like batons at friends.

One girl; neon, hovers to piss �" knickers hitched;
bum stuck out. Not. Touching. Anything.
A hand appears under her wall; frantic -�"
holding the rubber-ringed knotted-end of a

condom �" the rest? Awry inside its owner.
Fanny rammed with pills; fizzing like sherbert.
proposing that the pissing stranger help
scoop them out before death comes from on high.

The girl wees, removes rings, rolls sleeves, breathes deep;
knocks on; "let me see" -�" first piss of the night.

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

This is good. Your best. Very vibrant and quivering thunder-like.