Fall Morning

Trying my hand at Haiku

Train sounds in distance

Wind blows, rain pours, and crows fly

Outside my window

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This, to me, is the crux of haiku -- speaking thru imagery. No break-thru of the poet's thoughts or impressions or analysis. Just pure uninterrupted imagery. This is what haiku is meant to be (((HUGS)))

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you, I appreciate it. I'm having fun with haiku and am starting a series of "Outside My Window".

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

I can imagine such a scene , at my grandma's house , looking out the window , the sounds of the train coming from a far distance while its raining . I haven't been able to visit her cuz of Covid , thanks Shelly for a lovely reminder .

Kathy

[Shelley Warner]

You're welcome. I hope you can see your grandma soon. This covid thing just keeps on going unfortunately.

[Chris Shaw]

Sight, sound and touch. Very nicely conveyed Shelley. I saw it all.

Chris

[Shelley Warner]

Aww thank you Chris. I hadn't written Haiku since I worked with some junior high students ten years ago.

[Chris Shaw]

I like them very much. Do a few myself from time to time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Well done, Shelley....
presents a very distinct image.

j.

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you Jacob. It was fun to try Haiku again.

[G. A. Bernard]

Nicely done Shelley! Great images. Hope you had fun writing this Haiku

[Shelley Warner]

I totally did. Thanks for inspiring me.