A Galaxy in the Universe

When the time runs out

and there's nothing left but to think

you reflect on the world 

and the choices you have made

Not every one worthy of an applause 

but some stand out with a memory

good bad funny or nice

everything matters in your life

look into the eyes of a loved one 

what do you see?

their soul resonating 

at the sound of your voice

each and every person matters in a way

we are all a part of this universe

the stars are inside us, close your eyes

rub them until you see the starry sky

Author's Note

This is an older work from when I took poetry class. I stumbled upon it and wanted to share it as my first piece on here. I apologize for any grammar errors or spelling mistakes. Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[SAYED THANGAL]

It is philosophical and at the same time mystic, portrays the real life,
Sayed

[diamonddave75]

Nicely done.. You're a talented writer.. I totally agree, we are all part of this universe..


Dave

[ChrystalCompass]

Thank you! :)

[Lexi Richard]

I like this a lot and how you interpreted this idea. Nicely done!

[ChrystalCompass]

Thank you so much!