Sun Rise and Set

Its a poem I did for the heck of it about the sunrise and the sunset

Sunrise

 

Life revives as the sun mounts higher

Dreams unravel with the blossoms

And streaks cry outwards into the trees

 

Grass giggles with gladness

As the frost transforms to dew

Birds fly to get the wet worm

 

Scents of pine and oak tingle the nose

Newly found rays burn the eyes

And a picture of perfect harmony arises

 

Alas, time elapses with the morning’s breeze

The sun plays tag with the horizon

And sunrise merges to the sunset

 

Blues and blacks dance on reflecting water

The owl hoots watching them dance

Then everything fades to a peaceful darkness

 

Sunset

Author's Note

I guess... just tell me what you think

Reviews

[Day's-eye]

I like the personification in this, lines like "Grass giggles with gladness" and "The sun plays tag with the horizon" and how you sum up a whole day by how nature feels about it

[Heather D]

Wonderful. The imagery is incredible. I could almost smell the pine trees! I loved it.

[Moflo]

This was great. Such vivid images with a simple theme, and fantastic descriptions. Great write.

[JustASoul]

This is an amazing poem :) love the stunning imagery used and a good flow.
Great!

[Larry Dyson]

what did you think about my suggestions on the book?

[Larry Dyson]

lovely transition from morning waking to sleepiness at night...keep up the great descriptions..very nice I shared on facebook.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. I like how you took me to the evening sunset with strong description and story of a day in nature. It was a gentle and good flow of words. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Coyote

[trainwreck]

This piece was very sweet and kind. It was a nice break from sadness, and a wonderful reflection. Good job on the imagery as well!

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery hereI could see it all!

[Jeff]

Great imagery!