Our looks

Our looks

A Poem by ni ni
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Those looks I share with you...the ones that make me lose my breath...

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Countless times

Our eyes meet

Holding still I do my best to look away,

To look as if I hadn't looked at all..

But You aren't stupid,

You know I was,

Just like I know when I'm not looking,

You look at me..

We never say a word to one another,

And after this year you will graduate.

But we hold back...

Only to keep sharing

 The looks we always dare

The ones I wish were more

But will never be..

Our eyes will be the only ones to meet....

© 2012 ni ni


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Oh, I wasn't sure where this was going, but the last line really brings it all together and I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ni ni

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
I can totally relate to this one... it's just one of those possibilities lost that always makes you wonder on the what if... I'm basically having flashback here... good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ni ni

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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