Breaking

It's not you it's me

classic break up line

with a new spin

it's me

push push push

til the cracks appear

in something so transparent

now your forced to

look at it instead of

through it.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

I really don't thinkkkk, that it's a pretty poem, i think....neah...i believe it's a damn pretty song that i just sung it out. Moreover, i'm still singin' this one, ahhh, thank god it's not larger to read or else i could forget to sing....lol
well, it's nice piece, hey, did you sing it with your guitar or any kinda instrument, couse if you do then all your frndd's'll gonna be jealus to you, thereby who the thing is she, how she can write beautiful, sing beautiful n moreover may be can dance awesome...lol
well, it's a nice piece, i'm singin' it still.
i love such kinda short piece;s to read ot may b this time to sing...lol

[Mr.Cardigan]

lovely :)

[Kyle Sky]

Beautiful piece. the subtlety of the theme and idea was just great.

[sheila.j]

Thank You!!

[M. Kier McCarey]

Story of my life lol.

[sheila.j]

mine too

[nostal]

Transcendant
Inspiring
Yes
No
why
who
what
when
where
I
am
so
epic
and
transcendant
and
interesting
and
as
daniel-day lewis
said
in
there will be blood
I DRINK YOUR
MILKSHAKE
DRINK IT ALL UP

[sheila.j]

haha well thanks..? this was funny and kinda odd...made me laugh though :)

[Ohhhwillow]

Really love this. Sometimes the clearest ideas are the most striking. Well done

[sheila.j]

Thank you!!

[_]

:O That's so true!!! I love this, ooooo it made me think ^^ I don't think lol but this got me! :D Awesome poem, it was a flippin delight! >:)

[sheila.j]

Thank you...I'm glad it made you think I wanted to make people think about it :)