The Show

I never thought I’d get to this point, but here I am

Can I have an applause for this one great production

Glad you could all laugh at who I am

Funny how laughter brings pain huh?

Didn’t think that anything could bring me down

Or was it because I’m already one pathetic f**k?

Thanks, you were all a wonderful audience

Thing is I wasn’t putting on a show

Come watch me from six feet under

I hear the view is better from below.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Dark and adroitly felt as far as feeling and trying to understand what may have caused such distress. I hope the day you wrote this, it ended on a good note and the mood quickly passed for you!! You've got a lot of energy packed into that tight frame of a poem. I like it. xoxo -Mark

[sheila.j]

Thanks!! And writing this helped me get a lot of anger out so I think that is a good note :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

My dear lady and naught mine...
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/roquelazarus/740120/

[Mr.Cardigan]

i like it

[RachelReaper]

whoa, spitting poison I LOVE IT! the way you portray such outraged sarcasm is something to be admired.