Society

Society is a plague, a sickness

Spreading disease and creating weakness

Making you see yourself in a dark light

Pushing for an internal fight

The hatred always increasing

The expectations never ceasing

 

Society isn't diverse

It's the exact reverse

Striving to be the same

Clones, where the only differences is the name

Everyone trying to be the perfection

It's no worse than a deadly infection

 

Society is a mutation

Deformed in a poisonous relation

With people going insane

Putting themselves through uneeded pain

The imperfections are magnified

Put into persepective for the ignorant and terrified

 

Society is a predetermined fate

Where only the insecure can relate

It preys on the indecisive and pliable

Putting down the independent and reliable

It's genocide for those with heart

And the people who refuse to take part

Author's Note

So i worked pretty hard on this and i curious what everyone thinks about it

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

The last paragraph was my favorite, because its that spark that I was looking for when I started reading this. The spark that can set fire and cause revolutions. My favorite, favorite part was the last line, you couldn't have ended this any better. Very, very nice work giving this a fighting spirit!

[Lorenzo Giardano]

Not only is this a great piece of writing, but I completely agree with everything in this poem. Nice job!

[sheila.j]

thank you

[M. Kier McCarey]

Its interesting someone your age has such an insight onto how the world works. I like the rhyme scheme for this, your chose of vocabulary was different and it fit quite well. And as I read it, I could hear this performed as a rock or a fusion, Linkin Park-esque song.

[freewinter]

This is so good! I love the description and all the words used.

[sheila.j]

Thank you!

[ewest1220]

As a self inducted outcast to society I can really relate to this poem. The tone throughout is absolutely superb! Great job.

[sheila.j]

Thank you...I was really hoping people could find a way to relate to this

[zainul]

You have written a rewarding piece.
You have unfolded existing abnormalities of the society like a great craftsperson.
Use of scientific words so skillfully amazed me.

[sheila.j]

Thank you!

[zainul]

You are most welcome

[Admiral Kirk]

AWESOME! I can totally relate to this... As everyone in society should. I try to distance myself from what everyone else is doing as much as possible... I've actually written a few poems on this topic, and I know how you feel. Great job!

[sheila.j]

thank you!! i was hoping people would be able to relate to it!

[Admiral Kirk]

You're welcome. :)