COLD

COLD

A Poem by 🐻 🎀 𝒿𝓊𝓈𝓉𝓁𝑒𝑒𝓁𝒶 🎀 🐻
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This poem describes how is can be depressing and cold when ou get deep down in your spirits

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Buried deep beneath the snow,

A darkened portal waits below.

In the cold, where shadows creep,

I’ve heard the whispers, secrets keep.

Hope drifts away, like haunting sighs,

Lost in silence, where warmth dies.

Nothing I know feels brave or bright,

All is a shroud in the endless night.  

© 2025 🐻 🎀 𝒿𝓊𝓈𝓉𝓁𝑒𝑒𝓁𝒶 🎀 🐻


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I think it's an interesting metaphor to relate rough patches and being down in the dumps with snow. Here's hoping for warmer days and for melted snow, be it metaphorical or literal.

Posted 4 Days Ago


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4 Days Ago

Hey! Thank you for your review, I appreciate it.

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Added on January 1, 2025
Last Updated on January 1, 2025
Tags: poem, young adult, life, trouble, depression, cold

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