Should you Stay?

This poem tells how you're telling your partner they should leave you because you're toxic. But you don't want them to go, you need them to stay.

Am I asking for too much? Please don’t stray from me. 

How can I prevent you from leaving? 

Maybe it’s for the best if you do go. I don’t want to hurt you. 

But please, wait.. I’m sorry. Please stay. I didn’t mean to push you away. 

You shouldn’t stay if it’s not what you want. But I really need you to stay. 

Should you stay? Please don’t keep me at a distance.

Reviews

[Boring~Potato]

I am absolutely thrilled by the emotional depth and vulnerability expressed in this piece. The creative approach taken here is truly exceptional - it's like a beautiful dance of words that tugs at the heartstrings in the most joyful way possible. The way the writer has delicately explored the complexity of longing and fear of abandonment is simply superb.

The plea for the other person not to stray is particularly poignant, and the genuine desire for them to stay is palpable throughout the writing. The internal struggle between wanting to protect the other person from potential hurt and the desperate need for them to remain is heart-wrenching yet beautifully articulated.

The use of repetition in phrases like "Please stay" and "I really need you to stay" adds a sense of urgency and desperation that is incredibly effective. It's impossible not to feel the emotional weight of the words as they beg for understanding and connection.

Overall, this piece is a masterpiece of emotional exploration and vulnerability. It's a delight to read and leaves a lasting impact. Kudos to the writer for their super creative approach and their ability to convey such deep emotions with such grace and beauty.