I'm me

two people , i and u

i call us we

you say i'm me 

i spend my time waiting to see

if what we found is future bound

u know me im poetry

all cozy and special

and i would never settle

for not hearing your voice so 

just make the choice

and live up to my dreams

because in my eyes we could be all we seem

to each other

and please know your more than a lover

it's quite ok i see who you are

i will still call you star

king

prince of my inspirations

posessor  of my dedicated thoughts

memories

bodily extreamities

and internal abilities

so i need to know today

why do you have me questioning the affair

i feel a mystery in the air

did i cause a problem when i was only trying to solve them

im the same mistake you made before just looking like a diffrent answer

and your having an epifany you need to get over me

cause now all i could be 

os the sum of our flaws

jus because i gave up the draws

but wait you digress

and say im not the reason for you fright

if im not then dont ever treat me like you did last night

so who am i

i cant be two two people in love

i and u

i call us we

u say im me

 

 

 

Reviews

[mind_of_a_pisces]

Relationships can be so confusing when opposites come together but what people fail to realize eventually the love you all have for each other comes together... Very Great Piece... It's what most people go through in relationships...

[StoryTailor]

Very good piece. There are a few typos, but every writer makes them. Good job with this.