channel zero

I

wish

I

could

bring the picture into

FOCUS

from analog

to digital

but

i don't have a little 

box 

to make things

perfect

so

there's

"snow"

snow to the point that i cant see

snow that makes me cold

and i wrap up in the covers or my robe

for a week

I

wish the picture was of warm sun and blue sky

but instead

the snowy picture

is of

you

and although

i cant bring the picture

in 

to

focus

you are

still

my favorite pastime

biting my lip straining my eyes and listening through the static

waiting for a conclusion

if

i could get a clear signal

then maybe

i wouldn't rewind so much

trying to capture the bits and pieces that

got

lost

if i could bring the picture into focus

maybe 

just

maybe

i could get to the end

and

move on

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lady V]

Sometimes its al about cosure. Why we hate someone to core of their being or why we wish we had something we lost. In this piece that was what I got. Rewinded things back through our memories and straining to see who was at fault and why. I must admit Ive done that some times as well. In an effort not to rambe I will just say great job.

Great piece.

Live, love and Learn

[QuietPoet]

This was great. I liked how you formed this write. Very deep and emotional. I liked the flow of the piece. Nice job.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

EXCELLENT. i really liked this poem. it flowed, and i had to read it aloud to myself bec it was so good. had a very poetic feel, and warm with emotions. thak you for sharing.

[Nish Nish the Fish]

Wowwwie, this is GREAT! really great.
very deep and meaningful!
I loved it!
what a creative way to express your confusion for a person, i know the feeling, to wish everything was clear and you always new what to do,
great write!