wishing

like throwing pennies in the water

i make wishes

wishes that you are fine

and that with the passing time

you remember who i am

and begin to see things clearly

like throwing pennies in the water

my thoughts splash up to the point where i can see them

then fall back to their designated space

just to comprimise

but remaining copper circles in a transparrent world

they are spotted,

here and there

by themselves small

but when calculated

valuable

like throwing pennies in the water i make wishes for understanding

 

 

Reviews

[Jason]

Deep, sort of like the water you speak of in this piece. I found this piece very self reflective indeed...

"like throwing pennies in the water

my thoughts splash up to the point where i can see them

then fall back to their designated space

just to comprimise"

Over all good honest write
Thanks

[perfectlymetiKulous]

a very lovely piece. it made me feel quite nostalgic and wistful. thanks for the read request.