To Have A Reason

how i truly feel

I dont want to dry any tears

I dont want to start a conflict

I dont want to hurt any body

I dont want to live in fear

 

I dont want to have regrets

I dont want to be a fool

I dont want to be a hypocrite

I dont want to have to forget

 

I dont want to doubt my common sence

I dont want to be an enemy

I dont want to loose a friend

I dont want to have a laugh at any ones expence

 

I dont want to loose me

I dont want to be fake

I dont want to go to hell

I dont want to be needy

 

I dont want to ignore my potential

I dont want my life to be coincidential

I dont want to live chasing the brass ring

I dont want to have a reason to think i am all these things

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is powerful, knowledgable and holds the scope of insight, the inner awareness corresponding
with reason and finds justification for certainty and cause. I believe the heartfelt meaning has
a great way of drawing the reader to ponder in depth such reasons as in being. humbly written
and expressed, leaves the reader with a feeling of added wisdom. Great Job!

[Tiana]

I loved this great powerful, insightful poem! Way to go! thanks for sharing :)) Hugs

[Kedeyi]

This poem reads like a heartfelt shout in the middle of a vast field or forest... or a jab to a pillow or punching bag...

Aaaaaaaaaarrrggghhhhh!

It's raw and unpretentious and articulates the frustration that we all feel from time to time but which we either hold in, or allow to spew out with negative emotional force.

High on resonance and impact.

[Farrah Grahm]

I liked the repitition a lot. and the duality of it, at some points you wanted to not be something negative, at other you wanted to not be something helpful
"I don't want to dry any tears" seemed like you didn't want to be depended upon.
but something like
"I don't want to be fake" is negative, so I like the variation.
Great job.

[EmpressPoetess]

Very emotive thought provoking write. You put a lot of thought into this. great job

[M. View]

Thats deep and emotional cause every one feels at less one of those in them self. Great writing don't stop exploring your style keep reaching for the stars.