The Blues

Ive got the blues blues blues blues blues

Ive got the blues blues blues blues blues

Ive got the blues

I feel your words so deeply

i want you and am in love with you so completely

I feel our pain flow to a stream so deeply

flooded by our tears

Ive got the blues

and today its coming out like a song

on a beautiful day i went home and put my nightgown on

I made a strong cup of tea to keep me from sleeping

I'd rather be up with you on my mind and weeping

Ive got the blues blues blues blues blues

I cant shake them

Blues blues blues blues blues

I keep the blues blues blues blues blues

I cant fake them

blues blues blues

My love was like sweet rich red velvet cake on a summer day

it was coaco and i didnt know how but any way

I was glad to tste it all no matter the calories that would stay

and add weight to my middle

like love handles a little

Ive got the blues

cause what we had just couldnt be had

no matter the fact that we both needed it so bad

no matter the fact that our performance was oscar worthy and

your my nominee

this is not the silver screen

and those days were just a dream

and all thet we could be are the Blues

blues blues blues blues blues

to one annother

forbidden  forgotten forsaken

lovers

i sing the blues 

and this songs rythm

is the beating of your heart

its sung to the music of your soul

written by circumstances icy cold 

hand

this hood is our band

and ive got the blues

blues  blues blues blues blues blues

 

Reviews

[Jason]

Awesome! I really Really Liked this piece. (I think you know why)

Keep 'em coming.
Oh and there are some type-o's but over all really good.


Thanks

[M. View]

Is this meant to be a song or poem? I like it when you say

to one annother
forbidden forgotten forsaken
lovers
i sing the blues

nice write