Aquarius

I could pour my warm delicious natural Aquarious wet

all over your soul

and you would become so saturated

that your mind

lubricated

would easily

wrap itself around the possibilities

and what was once a desert to burn ones feet

where no thing could grow

would blossum into a comfortable foliage

to rest and lay and play in

don't you want that?

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I loved the use of the word "wet"; that was very creative.
this may have been unintentional, I don't know, but I am an avid astrology freak (and interestingly enough, an aquarius [[:), so I loved the incorporation of change from the desert to lush foliage because one of the main attributes of aquarians is a love for change, and growth.
Very well done, I really enjoyed this.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

i guess you are an aquarius? lol. i love this poem. wow, short, but written so poetically, and slick, that it whisked me away to another world. i added you as a friend too.

[Yereziah]

oh wow this is so sensual its like every line makes love to the reader...love it!!

[Monday Parker]

Wow very seductive�I just LOVE the lines
"I could pour my warm delicious natural Aquarious wet
all over your soul"
wow that's so amazingly said. I love it when people use their sign to add to what they are or to what they mean. Great great job, I would love to see more of this poem, maybe extend it a little.