the battle

in a room of my own i sit

i sit waiting and debating

 

in the solitude of my loneliness i want

i want wanting to be mutual

 

in my struggle i struggle profusely

i win and i lose me

i cant find you

your lost in the battle

Reviews

[Jason]

I really like this one. I think that its so hard for me to comment on other peoples pieces because I only want to say good things or i think "who am i to judge" or im affriad what i think a piece is about, isn't what the writer intended. But this piece here really spoke to me, I think its because im in a battle with my self right now as well.
Great piece.


Thanks

[BlessedLove]

Lovely...just lovely!