a voice of fear and pain

think of the letters in bold as the voice of fear and pain

this voice that fights with me and wins

with its suspicions

has come again

with its suspicions

and fear of pain

it lies to me again

 

I would like to feel my love

no matter the danger

no matter the danger

the taste of love lets me alive

my heart takes it in stride

this voice that fights with me and wins

cant stand that im in love again

because

my love,

it never wins

so why on earth do i dabble

when love is surely trouble

 

of all the good it has no worth

your tender heart is surely cursed

your ideal is so grossly perverse

please heed my protective cry it sais

please heed my protective cry

no i say with tears from my eye

I want to feel my love!

what good is all this ability

to share in someones harmony

to share in someones harmony and laugh at someones joke

to know the softness of his hair, his skin, his touch, his care

to use my words to soothe his burns

 

i wish that someday you could learn

you never get this in return!

 

this voice voice that fights with me and wins

with its suspicions

has come again

with its suspicions

and fear of pain

it lies to me again

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

this voice voice that fights with me and wins
with its suspicions
has come again
with its suspicions
and fear of pain
it lies to me again

This is such a moving and powerful piece of poetry. Thanks Jason for requesting that I read this. I understand why this poem moved him enough to share because it has done the same for me. Great write and perfect flow like a song that you do not want to end.

[Lyrical Love]

This is excellent!!
Thanks Jason I love your taste. Great rhythm and flow-much needed for me to feel a poem.
I would like to feel my love

no matter the danger

no matter the danger

the taste of love lets me alive

my heart takes it in stride

this voice that fights with me and wins

cant stand that im in love again

because

my love,

it never wins

so why on earth do i dabble

when love is surely trouble

Very well done!

[BlessedLove]

this voice voice that fights with me and wins
with its suspicions
has come again
with its suspicions
and fear of pain
it lies to me again

Wow...loved this poem! really nice..and informative...really informative! loved the style..ur way with words is unique...and PRICELESS!

[Jason]

I really like this one! its very honest and I can feel the pain in your words. It has some spelling errors but that is nothing major.



Thanks