butterfly caught in the hurricane

the sory of a little girl

when she was born it started to rain

but no one around seeked shelter

so when the high winds started to come

she didnt know to run

everyone told her she was strong

as strong as the thunder and could last twice as long

so she stood soaked in the rain freezing her bones

facing the thunder and lightning alone

untill the winds force whipped her to the ground

and she felt ashamed

for everyone saw this as "the game"

and she had failed

but not for trying

see it was that wind  and all its lying

it kept her confused time after time

whipping 10 diffrent ways with no direction in mind

she tried for the sake of those who sealed her fate in doom

born her into a world where dark clouds loom

and thunder cracks and lightning strikes and hail and wind and rain

born her to be a butterfly caught in the hurricaine

 

Reviews

[Captain Ugly]

A strong piece! I love the storm metaphor and I really like the title. Great write my friend.
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