thats where the balance lies

thats where the balance lies

A Poem by sheerpoetry
"

lost love

"

he said things to me like your a queen

and treated me like royalty

tellin me i was a richeous sister

exotic in a way

it made him feel like a gift had been placed in his hands

just to see me smile and

he didnt deserve it

im just a simple man he said

and when i tried to explain that if i reguard him in the same fashion

because we share the same passion for things in life that lie below the surface

you know

we both deep

 then thats where the balance lies

and in turn he said to me

I AM JUST A SIMPLE MAN

u deserve so much more

in my eyes your level is evn more elevated than what was previously stated in this verse

not a queen ruling on this earth but

the mother of the universe

and i am but a pebble a mere grain of sand

i can barley at this point call myself a man

IM NOT

i said

Im ordinary and plain

so i tryied my best from then on out to prove we were the same

I talked about my flaws even let him see them

just looking for acceptance trying not too be him

but a mirrored version

so we would fit

but our flaws didnt match in a way that would make my reflection his perfection

so ultimatly i became less regal in his eyes

left abandoned and to cry

when i asked why

BECAUSE

your not the queen i thought you was

© 2009 sheerpoetry


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Very nice write, and interesting concept.

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