I'm Not Ready to Let Go.

A Poem by horsedreamer

Why do i put myself through this?

How do you tell yourself it is time to let go?

My brain knows the truth,

it will never happen.

But my heart still believes.

I sit here thinking there is a chance.

One small glimmer of hope.

That is what keeps me holding on,

to something that i am not even sure is there.

© 2013 horsedreamer

Author's Note

Ignore the poor write, i just want thoughts on how to go more into detail and thoughts on the topic. Need help!!!!!!!!! Thanks.

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J. F. Charleston

Well... hmm... It is relatable. It's hard to know when it's time to let go. Didn't really mind how it was written, but what message it was trying to tell. Well from my last review, didn't really give much advice. To add to it, I think you should tell what the situation is, but not give names though. Or give a situation that would add to it and clear up the message of why you don't want to let go.

Posted 11 Years Ago

J. F. Charleston

Well it seems to me like a romantic fantasy. Not much of thought of what you should write, but just write from your heart. Write what you're feeling and let it twist into something great. I still have a hard time with this. Good write, hope I helped you.

Posted 11 Years Ago

~*~Peace Keeper~*~

Hmm...well I don't know exactly what this write is about, I'm guessing letting go of a relationship or hope of a relationship. If you make it a little more clear on what you are talking about without necessarily putting it word for word it may make it clearer for the reader. I get the confusion and hope in this perhaps describing more of how it feels. Can't really help other than that lol It sounds good so far though and if nothing else it could work like this and the reader could just make up their own story of what happened. Totally up to you.