Hold on for the ride

This is about the elements of bull riding.

One bull
Two horns
Four hooves
Eight seconds
Two thousand pounds of uncontrallable fury,
Underneath one man.

Reviews

[J. F. Charleston]

Sounds like a good start to a piece. May I suggest adding a bit more to it, like why he's riding the bull, etc. It kinda left me disappointed how there was that much when I wanted to read more, but that's me. It's still a good write, but I would add a little more to it. Good luck and keep writing.

[horsedreamer]

Thank you, I need to think of what to add to it, I know what I want o say, just not how to word it but thanks again!

[J. F. Charleston]

I understand where you're coming from. Having a really good idea, just can't get the write wording for it. Well, trial and error seems to work best. Don't give up. You're welcome for the review.

[K.Butler]

Love it! Maybe add like a descriptive word before 'bull' 'horns' 'hooves' 'seconds.' It has a good effect with the short lines but the 'two thousand pounds of uncontrollable fury' adds description. Or maybe after the word, add something after it like the 'of uncontrollable fury' if that makes sense...