*TRUTH*

Could it be that you believe in me

Will the world soon grow too and see

Is this a confession from within

I think the blood that flows is way to thin

As I sit here and wonder I begin to grin

For my life has been rid of all sin

Pleasent forest, crowded mall

I'm just waiting for the bridge to fall

To many choices all for minds sake

I hope our bond shall never break

This my claim I have written only to make

A statement of faith to cherish and create

Tell me no lies and I will stand at your side

Disgrace me now and it has been a pointless ride

Reviews

[justink :):)]

i like this poem it is open and honest good job


justin

aka justintime

[justjenn_2u]

I convey that you will be there for the other person until you can no longer trust. You have rid yourself of being untrue and are giving your heart as long as you are not used. Very open and honest poem.