Struggles

My struggles recently have all been internal, 
problems created within my own skull,
They cause me to cry, they cause me to feel weak,
And most nights they put me to sleep.
I'm tired of the feelings, of pain and sadness.
They need to stop before they drive to to madness.
The struggles are real, 
feels like few care, 
but i know why they don't show that they're there...

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Heartfelt poem, strong and emotional. One suggestion.. cry and weep are the same thing.. perhaps something like
"they cause me to crumble, they cause me to weep" also you have a type'0 there undoubtedly the dang spell checker.. I think you meant Me not my in line three.. Keep writing.. If you ever need to vent give me a holler.. shallimarRose

[staYoung]

Thanks for the suggestions, i fixed the typo, and instead of weep I put, makes me feel weak.
Thanks for pointing that out to me

[shallimarRose]

No problem.. Its a great peace. Rose

[tmike]

That second line feels so common.. Like we're seeing and believing in problems that aren't really their but now their stuck in our heads. I liked this!