Don't Go Yet

Bit lyric like.. Not intended but it turned out quite well

My lips are left half open
Longing for your kiss
And my shudders have stayed frozen
Waiting for your warmth
This empty space between us
How do I fill the gap?

I'm missing you in too many ways
Couldn't make myself go one step further
Knowing you are not here
Who was I fooling when I ignored my need?
For someone like you in my life
It was so hard to stay real

I want you more than you want me
I need you more than than you could see
There was more of me that you held together
Even greater now is what you've left to crumble
Pick me up from where I now stay stunted
Whisper me the words to find another prospect

Tell me it's going to be okay
And that though you are not near me
I should stay
Even if just in my dreams
Please hold me, I still need you
Touch me so I could feel you
Warm me for I am lonely
Say the words that would soothe me

Don't go just yet, I'm not ready!
Teach me how it is to keep steady
You won't be here to keep myself together
Might as well leave me when I'm better
My legs aren't ready to keep me up
My heart is too weak it might fall apart
Don't go just yet, stay a little while

Author's Note

Never thought I could write this and I would really like to know what you think!

Picture credit goes to: http://www.flickr.com/photos/crosti/374764915/

Reviews

[Stammers]

'My legs aren't ready to keep me up'

emotional line. This is very good, the title pulled me in and the poem didn't fall short, I think however it would benefit from a little revision, I only say this as it's worth the work. Kudos, keep writing.

[Nicole]

Omg, this was beautiful..but adds on to my depressing mood.
Its really good...haha.
I broke his heart, and he was pleading with me to stay..
That's the thing that pops into my mind when I read this.
^^me rambling.
This was honestly a nice poem.
100/100

[TMS.Shammie]

Ok this is a really nice piece of work.. i really liked it.. you've made a very nice expression from this poem of yours..